[Gambas-user] Gambas 2.0 RC1 article

[timothy]

> -----Original Message-----
> From: gambas-user-bounces at lists.sourceforge.net 
> [mailto:gambas-user-bounces at lists.sourceforge.net] On Behalf 
> Of Benoit Minisini
> Sent: Tuesday, 06 November 2007 09:45 PM
> To: mailing list for gambas users
> Subject: Re: [Gambas-user] Gambas 2.0 RC1 article
> 
> 
> On mardi 6 novembre 2007, timothy wrote:
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: gambas-user-bounces at lists.sourceforge.net
> > > [mailto:gambas-user-bounces at lists.sourceforge.net] On Behalf Of 
> > > Benoit Minisini
> > > Sent: Tuesday, 06 November 2007 11:03 AM
> > > To: gambas-user at lists.sourceforge.net
> > > Subject: [Gambas-user] Gambas 2.0 RC1 article
> > >
> > >
> > > Hi,
> > >
> > > I think that the article for Gambas 2 RC1 at 
> > > http://gambasdoc.org/help/doc/release is almost finished.
> > >
> > > Feel free to read it, comment it and fix it before too 
> much rubbish 
> > > is thrown out to the face of the world. :-)
> > >
> > > Regards,
> > >
> > > --
> > > Benoit Minisini
> >
> > Would it be OK for me to fix some of the English grammar. I do not 
> > intend to change any of the content.
> >
> > But lines like "Its architecture is very inspired by Java" 
> would read 
> > better as "Its architecture is greatly inspired by Java". 
> There are of 
> > few other things like this I would make.
> >
> > I assume you have saved the original?
> >
> > Thanks
> >
> > 8-{)} Timothy Marshal-Nichols
> > <mailto: timothy.marshal-nichols at ...247...>
> >
> 
> Every change made in the wiki is archived and can be undone, 
> so feel free to 
> fix what you want!
> 
> -- 
> Benoit Minisini
> 

I have made a few little changes. They are all changes of style, the
content remains the same. I shall read it through again tomorrow.

I notice that my last email also contained some grammatical errors.
Maybe I should have checked that through as well!

Thanks

8-{)} Timothy Marshal-Nichols
<mailto: timothy.marshal-nichols at ...247...>